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Gilly J
Number of posts: 1251
Points: 1178
Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | | Subject: Misty Morning Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:51 am | |
| Misty Morning
Through the mist
The trees appear,
Grasping branches
Jump out near,
The mighty trunks
Reach so high,
Stretching up
To touch the sky,
Where vapours merge
Into atmosphere,
The sun bursts through
Then all is clear. Gilly J |
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Berry van Hagen
Number of posts: 286
Age: 59
Location: The Hague, Netherlands
Points: 285
Registration date: 2008-11-01
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:10 am | |
| What a lovely atmospheric picture you paint. I can see it right in front of me. It proves that you don't need many words to create something magical. I have sometimes managed to do that. Walking through the woods when there is a very dense mist seems really special to me. It almost makes you long for such weatherconditions. Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
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bruce_hh
Number of posts: 4432
Age: 64
Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A.
Points: 4931
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:53 pm | |
| Dear **Gilly**: Your verses brought cheer by seeming both brilliant and clear. Each hour may hold darkness yet, also, a starkness that asks every sorrow to veer.  |
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davidf
Number of posts: 1799
Points: 1579
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:24 pm | |
| Gilly, Liked this, the title took me as a surprise, but when I was finished reading all was clear. Your friend, David Fox |
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Carol Perroni
Number of posts: 682
Points: 761
Registration date: 2008-12-27
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:03 am | |
| You've painted some nice images that remind me of taking a lovely walk through a forest on a misty day, Gilly.  Best, carol |
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antropolis
Number of posts: 879
Age: 37
Location: Garland, Tx
Points: 1587
Registration date: 2009-11-27
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:56 pm | |
| That was good Gilly! ~Scott |
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Admin
Admin
Number of posts: 81
Age: 54
Location: UK
Points: 106
Registration date: 2008-10-17
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:38 pm | |
| Yesterday at 6:51..... No wonder Gilly! What wonderous things you see before I get up at midday  Steve Orion at 3am Riggs. |
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Steve
Admin
Number of posts: 1255
Points: 1573
Registration date: 2009-03-23
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:40 pm | |
| I'll try that reply again.... Steve signing in and out Riggs
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crushed rose
Number of posts: 1282
Points: 1506
Registration date: 2009-08-29
| | Subject: Re: Misty Morning Mon Feb 27, 2012 10:34 pm | |
| Such a vision you have conjured, Gilly
I like days like that, and I could envision it as I read
Rose x |
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