annaneen

Number of posts: 42 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 98 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: The Green Fields Of France Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:24 am | |
| The Green Fields of France
Dreams and memories buried deep in mud bodies piled on high, covered in blood promises made, but never kept children who played, while women wept.
Is this the great legacy of the 'great' war? That so many died in one drawn out roar? Was there anything else that it achieved, apart from counting millions who were bereaved?
A moonscape created here on Earth a land full of death, instead of birth. Mans capacity for inhumanity stretched to the point of total insanity.
Men who returned, disfigured forever simple human tragedies, many times over. Men who had marched off to war full of hope Women who were left unable to cope.
The green fields of France are all quiet now the guns have been replaced by the plough. But the ghosts in grey lie still around you can feel them whenever you tread on the ground.
A winters-like scene in the middle of summer You can almost hear the old, distant drummer. The trenches and tunnels are all covered in yet still you can see them, the grass is so thin.
The crosses are stark in the midst of the green like voices of old, you can still hear them keen. The earth will recover it's soul from this place Man will take longer to return to God's grace.
© Ian Lumley |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4218 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4633 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: The Green Fields Of France Fri Jan 27, 2012 4:21 pm | |
| Dear **Ian**: The horrors of war your stanzas gave quite a ~What For!?~ The starker examples show feeling that samples humanity's treks through deep gore. |
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antropolis

Number of posts: 826 Age: 37 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 1508 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: The Green Fields Of France Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:13 pm | |
| That was good Ian! ~Scott |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 590 Points: 661 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: The Green Fields Of France Sat Jan 28, 2012 4:24 pm | |
| An excellent poem, Ian.
I totally share your vision of the senseless devastations of war.
Best, Carol
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1239 Points: 1164 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: The Green Fields Of France Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:23 am | |
| I liked the poem.. and I see there have been a lot of programmes on lately about the war... hope the young ones of today take note. |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1471 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: The Green Fields Of France Wed Feb 01, 2012 10:19 pm | |
| There was nothing 'great' about that war, except for great stupidity and great numbers of lost lives your poem speaks volumes about the senselessness of it
Rose |
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