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PostSubject: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:18 am

Stargazing.

On terra firma, we search wide and far
For tell tale signs, of some distant planets
Watching, and waiting, as light from a star
Slowly fades, as worlds complete their transits
Planets revolve around another Sun
Science looks for the light differential
Always to wonder, if this is the one
Whereupon life, would prove quintessential

And if such a world can be detected
Mankind advances, to the speed of light
Crosses the void, his target selected
Overcoming the perils of space flight

Though eons may pass, with nothing to show
Star systems exploded, light years ago

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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:39 am

Dear **Steve**: You homed in on bright lights
that long ago fought their main fights.
Your sonnet's precisions
provided provisions
for feeling in awe of fine sights.

Like a Star @ heaven
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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:48 am

Steve,
I am still waiting for (and if) there is a day when there is life -- intelligent or not -- on some other planet on some other galaxy. Good poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:18 am

A good poem about man's conquest of space, Steve Very Happy

Who knows what we might find out there alien

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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 7:43 pm

That was a good sonnet Steve! ~Scott
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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Thu Jan 26, 2012 9:01 pm

Well did you happen to see th bright lights this week Steve. Or was it too foggy for you

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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:04 pm

Thanks all.

Yes Doreen, Rose and I are stargazing most evenings.
Venus, and Jupiter are visible from here, and we shall be moving the telescope tomorrow night if its not cloudy.
Did you watch Dr Brian Cox, (the next youngest looking after Cliff Richard).

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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:25 am

I liked your poem.. and the universe will always make us pause... look.. and wonder...
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PostSubject: Betelgeuse   Tue Jan 31, 2012 12:00 am

Betelgeuse a red giant in Orion
Casting its elements, of iron
It seems nearly over
For this supernova
As each atom turns into an ion

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PostSubject: Re: Stargazing   Wed Feb 01, 2012 10:04 pm

we do indeed look at those stars, and wonder ....
a great sonnet about your favourite subject, Steve

Rose xx
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