bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: UNHAPPINESS Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:18 am | |
| UNHAPPINESS Unhappiness regripped the universe, which recently had seemed about to shout in favor of exhibiting no pout that likely wouldn't fail to kill each curse. Each miserable aspect looked far worse than any precedent whose central doubt had offered up the semblance of a lout prepared to dwell inside some putrid hearse. The lusciousness of heaven and of earth apparently prefigured certain bliss, but nothing could be tilted toward real mirth. Persistence held an endless kind of hiss that indicated something like a dearth perhaps much deeper than some vast abyss. |
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antropolis

Number of posts: 879 Age: 37 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 1587 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: UNHAPPINESS Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:18 pm | |
| That was a good sonnet Bruce! ~Scott |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: UNHAPPINESS Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:39 pm | |
| Dear **Scott**: As Big Drama in verse that sonnet might seem nearly terse. It largely was posing some way of quite closing a door called "True badness made worse." |
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