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jimmy1



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PostSubject: A NEW WALK   Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:42 am

I'd like to take you on a walk along this narrow lane
if you've never been before please accept any pain
first you need to ask your god to let you see the road
then let the weight of the cross you bear spread its load

you are now going deep inside yourself to find who you are
it does not matter what others do you will need to go far
looking for the obstacles that block you off from god
is it people institutions places that made you not see our lord

would you sell your soul to satin for fortune or for fame
have you ever had an evil thought and wondered how it came
this new road is narrow not many take this course
to get out safely you will have to find the new resource

this comes in a spiritual experience or a psychic change
relying on god to do this needs trust not using a syringe
taking mood altering substances works for some at the start
but if you keep on using them you break loved ones heart

so a change of mind is needed to go this twisting walk
it has to be achieved by action not by any talk
as talk is easy doing can be much fun too
if you have now started you will meet so very few
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bruce_hh



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:06 am

Dear **Jimmy**: Proposing that walk
might cause many spirits to squawk.
Sick bird I am (brainless
and far from quite stainless),
and, therefore, I'm likely to balk.

confused
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jimmy1



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:18 am

bruce_hh wrote:
Dear **Jimmy**: Proposing that walk
might cause many spirits to squawk.
Sick bird I am (brainless
and far from quite stainless),
and, therefore, I'm likely to balk.

confused
thanks bruce many do balk i find, but you will not be left behind.to find your destination,dont have contempt prior to investigation.and be well my friend god bless
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davidf



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:23 pm

Jimmy,
I am willing to walk the walk with you not just talk the talk.
Your friend,
David Fox
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jimmy1



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:20 pm

davidf wrote:
Jimmy,
I am willing to walk the walk with you not just talk the talk.
Your friend,
David Fox
thanks david we'll walk side by side being friends
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Gilly J



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:45 am

Thats a really well thought out poem Jimmy.. may God bless you, Gilly
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Carol Perroni



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PostSubject: Re: A NEW WALK   Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:22 pm

Jimmy, your poem marks the steps in your religious trail very well Very Happy

Best,
Carol
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