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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: WHAT A PILE! Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:27 am | |
| WHAT A PILE! The junk heap of humanity contains not only bottles, cans, and ruined cars but, more and more, the vast and mighty brains of everyone -- from bums to movie stars. As new events keep spinning us around, compelling us to wonder where we are, we seldom find the time to deeply sound our sense of whether things have gone too far. We plow ahead as if we scarcely care that nothing feels as pleasant as before, and as the years evaporate we stare contentedly at what we should abhor. The sorry truth is that we all may die without quite giving life some lively try. |
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antropolis

Number of posts: 879 Age: 37 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 1587 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:18 pm | |
| That was a good sonnet Bruce! ~Scott |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:12 pm | |
| Dear **Scott**: As it argues along, that sonnet perhaps can't be wrong. The crux of its being seems caught in untreeing a feline as ancient as song. |
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Eunice Perkins

Number of posts: 2668 Location: New Zealand Points: 2329 Registration date: 2008-11-06
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Thu Jan 19, 2012 10:20 am | |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Thu Jan 19, 2012 5:04 pm | |
| Dear **Eunice**: I guess that that sonnet has numerous bees in its bonnet. I felt rather sure that every great cure had something ~right hostile~ upon it. |
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jimmy1
Number of posts: 243 Age: 67 Location: blackpool Points: 300 Registration date: 2008-10-23
 | Subject: what a pile Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:13 pm | |
| well done bruce truth again jimmy |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:20 pm | |
| Yes indee you certainly tell us a pile of truth _________________   |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Fri Jan 20, 2012 3:17 am | |
| Dear **Jimmy** & **Lovely Doreen**: My lines may at times have a sheen. I proffer some stating as if I were freighting the world with some foods lank and lean. |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:49 am | |
| Innteresting poem Bruce.. and yes we will all die one day despite however much of a pile we accumulate. |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: WHAT A PILE! Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:53 pm | |
| Dear **Gilly**: As you've pointed out we dwell in large versions of doubt. Our grandiose visions include indecisions that often should urge us to pout. |
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