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annaneen

Number of posts: 44 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 102 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: Apocalypse Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:12 pm | |
| Apocalypse
The world is going to end, they say in December twenty-twelve. I'm not so sure their facts are right and so I'll need to delve.
Sometimes they're built around scary science with real truth in short supply. They hope that most won't understand or at least won't spot the lie.
Religion of sorts is often the excuse that allows these tales to be told When really what it's all about is people who can be controlled.
They flock like sheep to listen to seers with nary a thought for themselves but many a book could refute their fears you'll find them on library shelves.
But all these prophecies have one common thread they feed on man's discontent. The need to feel there's something 'out there' that they're powerless to prevent.
But if we can turn this around just a little give a reason for living, not dying. Then perhaps we'd all benefit from the change because we'd be smiling, not crying.
And if in the process we banish some fears and perhaps one another embrace. We can give the world a positive spin and make it a happier place.
I'll do my bit, if you promise to do yours I'll live life with a smile not a frown I'll enjoy my time here, for as long as it lasts and not worry about any melt down.
© Ian Lumley
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:48 pm | |
| Dear **Ian**: ~The end~ may be nigh, yet you aren't appearing to sigh. You seem to be chuckling at all the strange buckling of belts on the varying ~fry.~ |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1255 Points: 1573 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:52 pm | |
| A very sensible poem Ian, with a message I fully endorse. I daresay they will have a panic next year because it has 13 at the end _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 682 Points: 761 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:37 pm | |
| A good poem about the possible Apocalypse, Ian! I like your thoughts about it. This poem would fit really well into the January Challenge, if you're interested. It just goes to show you that people still really love to be frightened by a 'ghost' story or two, even if it is on an Apocalyptic scale! Best, Carol |
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jimmy1
Number of posts: 243 Age: 67 Location: blackpool Points: 300 Registration date: 2008-10-23
 | Subject: apocolypse Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:08 pm | |
| well done my friend i love this jimmyxx |
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annaneen

Number of posts: 44 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 102 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:54 am | |
| Thanks for your comments - as always - Carol. I don't even know how to enter the competition here, so perhaps we let this one slide. You comments are really all the reward I value. |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 682 Points: 761 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:03 pm | |
| That would be nice if you entered some of the monthly challenges, Ian! Your work is very good and you might find some of them fun! It's quite easy to enter a poem in the monthly challenge. You just go to the Index and scroll down to Poetic Challenges. Then you click on the Monthly Site Challenge section. You will see all the challenges listed by month and then you click on this month's challenge. You hit the Reply button so that your poem follows the other poems that have been posted for the month. Then you copy and paste your poem from Microsoft Word on your computer into the Message Body section. Don't forget to put in the title of your poem! When you are finished, you hit the Send button! Voilà! Good luck! Best, Carol |
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annaneen

Number of posts: 44 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 102 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:08 pm | |
| What a girl! Thanks, I'll try and do that. Ian |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 682 Points: 761 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:14 pm | |
| It would be nice to see your poems there!  Carol |
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annaneen

Number of posts: 44 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 102 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:54 am | |
| Done Carol. Many thanks for your help. I must spend more time on the site, although child minding for two grandsons (2 1/2 & 1 1/2) does not leave much spare!! Have read yours on the challenge - wonderful. Will read more of yours soon - I promise!! Take care |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:47 am | |
| I really enjoyed your poem, and I bet the little ones keep you busy when you have them.  |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 682 Points: 761 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: Apocalypse Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:40 pm | |
| Many thanks for submitting your excellent poem 'Apocalypse' to the January Challenge, Ian! Thanks for reading my poem! Have fun with your grandsons! Best, Carol |
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