bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:57 am | |
| SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT Some fashioner of beauty had begun some stern reminding of each afternoon as that late moment seemingly had spun some nifty semblance of some nice cocoon. The firm trepidity then in each tune engendering a solace and a lilt was rather like the pleasantry a rune might seem about to hurl on some old quilt. Preponderantly loving pangs of guilt that goldenly might cling (nay, always would) were in the modes by which I felt a hilt descending into entrails almost good. The gusty gutsy backdrops of some smiles forever were eclipsing many styles. |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:44 am | |
| I really like the way your words wove together to create this poem.  |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:11 pm | |
| Dear **Gilly**: My vocables flowed and somehow both glinted and glowed. The outcome was guilty of seeming as quilty as might any field nicely hoed. |
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