Poetic Skies welcomes 'Poets & Writers' who care and share
 
HomePortalFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in
Search
 
 

Display results as :
 
Rechercher Advanced Search
Latest topics
» A CHEESE
Yesterday at 10:51 pm by bruce_hh

» Fate
Yesterday at 9:56 pm by Steve

» YOUR BEAUTY
Yesterday at 9:35 pm by bruce_hh

» Haiku Madness
Yesterday at 2:26 am by bruce_hh

» SHEEP
Yesterday at 1:41 am by bruce_hh

» WE CARRY ALONG -- AND ALONG!
Mon May 21, 2012 9:36 pm by bruce_hh

» Limericks
Mon May 21, 2012 9:05 pm by bruce_hh

» SPECIAL BOND
Sun May 20, 2012 10:52 pm by davidf

» Shimmering brocade whispers.
Sun May 20, 2012 9:46 am by Eunice Perkins

Top posters
bruce_hh (4432)
 
Eunice Perkins (2668)
 
Doreen Hampshire (2569)
 
Jo Cursley (2343)
 
davidf (1799)
 
Val (1464)
 
crushed rose (1282)
 
Steve (1255)
 
Gilly J (1251)
 
karen (909)
 

Share | 
 

 SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
bruce_hh



Number of posts: 4432
Age: 64
Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A.
Points: 4931
Registration date: 2008-10-22

PostSubject: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT   Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:57 am

SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT
Some fashioner of beauty had begun
some stern reminding of each afternoon
as that late moment seemingly had spun
some nifty semblance of some nice cocoon.
The firm trepidity then in each tune
engendering a solace and a lilt
was rather like the pleasantry a rune
might seem about to hurl on some old quilt.
Preponderantly loving pangs of guilt
that goldenly might cling (nay, always would)
were in the modes by which I felt a hilt
descending into entrails almost good.
The gusty gutsy backdrops of some smiles
forever were eclipsing many styles.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Gilly J



Number of posts: 1251
Points: 1178
Registration date: 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT   Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:44 am

I really like the way your words wove together to create this poem. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile
bruce_hh



Number of posts: 4432
Age: 64
Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A.
Points: 4931
Registration date: 2008-10-22

PostSubject: Re: SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT   Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:11 pm

Dear **Gilly**: My vocables flowed
and somehow both glinted and glowed.
The outcome was guilty
of seeming as quilty
as might any field nicely hoed.

Idea
Back to top Go down
View user profile
 

SOMETHING HAPPENED NOT

View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

 Similar topics

-
» What happened to QE2's Stem Anchor.
» Bizzare/ awesome things that happened to you
» Whatever happened to the Teapots?
» Episode 25: ShizNat confessions, how it happened.
» Something Weird Happened to Me Today

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Poetic Skies Community Poets :: Written Words :: Poetry-