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bruce_hh



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PostSubject: ON COSTS   Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:55 am

ON COSTS
Conundrums cost an ample sum.
A riddle has a lower price.
Great fabulists remain on rum.
Conundrums cost an ample sum.
The birds whose beings often hum
fear many a form of sturdy lice.
Conundrums cost an ample sum.
A riddle has a lower price.
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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:07 pm

Another good poem Bruce! ~Scott
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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:14 am

Dear **Scott**: As comparing stays risky,
mayhap I was overly frisky.
Though words may equate,
they also don't state
so much that most sled-dogs seem husky.

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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Sat Jan 14, 2012 5:37 pm

Only one word to say.. BOGOF... and thats Buy One Get One Free.. lol so can we get two poems for the price of one?? Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:18 pm

Dear **Gilly**: Your point is well taken,
sith language was long since forsaken.
The value of speech
could be: it would reach
each branch of my bank, then be shaken.

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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:31 pm

Gilly,
I think Bruce was composing a triolet which repeats the same line the times in the body of the poem. Correct me if I'm wrong somebody.
Your friend,
David Fox
P.S. An excellent poem, Bruce!
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PostSubject: Re: ON COSTS   Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:50 am

Dear **David**: Large thanks for applauding
that ~triolet~ try, which craved lauding!
Such finicky forms
don't waken fine storms,
though often some folks might find nodding.

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