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jimmy1



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PostSubject: light in the tunnel   Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:29 pm

bounce at last i see the light in the tunnel after all these years
faster than a bullet but slower than my tears
as a dot it started long way off in my sight
coming ever closer yes it is that missing light

hurry as i run towards it tripping as i search in vain
is it my future i see oh no it's a flipping train
walk don't run as you'll miss so much beauty in your way
everything in your life is yours enjoy it for today

there always will be a light to show what's on the other side
sometimes the grass is not greener so hold on and just abide
god will give you all you need it's maybe not what you want
take the present anyway you'll find it is worth the jaunt

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PostSubject: Re: light in the tunnel   Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:50 pm

Dear **Jimmy**: You seem to see light
in worlds that were (ceaselessly) night.
You sound rather jolly
as if to shout: "Folly,
I like both your bark and your bite!"

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PostSubject: Re: light in the tunnel   Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:08 am

Jimmy,
I liked the humor in this as well as the message. I agree with you, with God's help it probably worth the trip, or jaunt, as you put it.
Your friend,
David Fox
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