bruce_hh
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 | | Subject: ALUMINIUM Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:36 am | |
| ALUMINIUM
Few metals may possess the sudden power
to lend allusive beings the rich taste
of ways in which the sky may be the flower
whose constant blooming often stays encased.
Mere aluminium is like a waist
whose minimal dimensions hurl a sigh
reminding several dreamers how erased
may be the perfect view of every sky.
Some glints perform the batting of an eye
intently wandering the sixty hills
that slowly have surrounded the near thigh
and sent some semblances of meager thrills.
The traveler evinces no new doubt
about the greatness of the way things shout. |
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Steve
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| | Subject: Re: ALUMINIUM Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:11 pm | |
| Thinly veiled, foiled again 
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Steve
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antropolis
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| | Subject: Re: ALUMINIUM Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:04 am | |
| That was a good sonnet Bruce! ~Scott |
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bruce_hh
Number of posts: 4432
Age: 64
Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A.
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Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: ALUMINIUM Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:52 am | |
| Dear **Steve** & Dear **Scott**: My main mettle indeed is some rather worn kettle. I hotly may try a sonnet quite dry, yet fogginess fouls up my fettle.  |
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