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antropolis
Number of posts: 879
Age: 37
Location: Garland, Tx
Points: 1587
Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | | Subject: BEYOND TOMORROW Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:39 pm | |
| Beyond tomorrow she will be free.
Beyond tomorrow--eternity.
Today, tomorrow's yesterday
Make life's events history,
But a dream lives on and on
Beyond tomorrow to eternity.
And like eternity, a dream
Anticipates reality--
A moment of joy, perfection,
A moment of incredible beauty
Molded in the eons of time,
But it is beauty nonetheless--
Beyond tomorrow it will be hers.
Beyond tomorrow where dreams are fused
Where reality, and Love awaits.
There love shall unfettered be,
And then begins eternity--
Beyond tomorrow.
Beyond tomorrow she will be free
Beyond tomorrow, eternity. |
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bruce_hh
Number of posts: 4432
Age: 64
Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A.
Points: 4931
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:10 pm | |
| Dear **Scott**: Hamlet's mother felt free to harp on life's lasting -- we see. You've mentioned tomorrow as (much to my sorrow?) I sense I might not always be.  |
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davidf
Number of posts: 1799
Points: 1579
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:44 pm | |
| Scott,
A good poem to start off the New Year!
Your friend,
David Fox |
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Steve
Admin
Number of posts: 1255
Points: 1573
Registration date: 2009-03-23
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:26 pm | |
| I dunno Scott, you just go on and on 
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Steve
www.noaddress.co.uk
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Carol Perroni
Number of posts: 682
Points: 761
Registration date: 2008-12-27
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:06 am | |
| A good poem, Scott!  It would be nice to think that eternity could bring such lovely things to someone! Best, Carol |
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Berry van Hagen
Number of posts: 286
Age: 59
Location: The Hague, Netherlands
Points: 285
Registration date: 2008-11-01
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:22 pm | |
| A beautiful uplifting poem! You should always hold on to your dreams. Valerie and me have dreams too and this is what I always keep in mind. Beyond tomorrow things will be so much better and that is what keeps you going. Beauty is out there waiting for you. You only need to reach out your hand and grab it. I just love it how you repeat the first two lines at the end. This poem really appealed to me. It was simply outstanding. Very well done, Scott! |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343
Age: 62
Location: East Devon, UK
Points: 2027
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:53 pm | |
| I liked this - but beyond tomorrow is impossible to reach I guess - so it shows the ephemerality and hopelessness of such dreams - good to have them though as they keep us in hope. Jo x |
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Gilly J
Number of posts: 1251
Points: 1178
Registration date: 2008-10-21
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Mon Jan 09, 2012 6:41 am | |
| I liked this.. it was almost like a song... and what will come after tomorrow.. only she knows.... |
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Eunice Perkins
Number of posts: 2668
Location: New Zealand
Points: 2329
Registration date: 2008-11-06
| | Subject: Re: BEYOND TOMORROW Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:19 am | |
| A very interesting poem, Scott. I am sure there is something better beyond tomorrow. |
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