bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158 Fri Dec 16, 2011 5:42 am | |
| CLVIII Last night, when we'd gone out to dine alone, your necklace caught my eye so frequently your face quite soon was merely one more zone where beauty learns invisibility. That necklace wasn't gaudy, yet it had a brilliance that my eyes were bound to note, and all its colo[u]red facets bore quite glad resemblances to tremblings in my throat. We ate our meal and spoke of life and love, and (though I heard your voice and saw your smile) the evening passed without my thinking of much more than how you always are in style. The gorgeous thing you'd wrapped around your neck apparently kept making me "a wreck."
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1255 Points: 1573 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158 Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:30 pm | |
| Another jewel Bruce _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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davidf
Number of posts: 1799 Points: 1579 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158 Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:49 am | |
| Yes, Bruce, a real gem! Your poem had me in stitches! Good job! Your friend, David Fox |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4432 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4931 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158 Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:48 am | |
| Dear **Steve** & Dear **David**: The gems supportive of truth skirt our hems. My ablest pajamas now practice all dramas that link wondrous research to stems. |
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