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 Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158

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PostSubject: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158   Fri Dec 16, 2011 5:42 am

CLVIII
Last night, when we'd gone out to dine alone,
your necklace caught my eye so frequently
your face quite soon was merely one more zone
where beauty learns invisibility.
That necklace wasn't gaudy, yet it had
a brilliance that my eyes were bound to note,
and all its colo[u]red facets bore quite glad
resemblances to tremblings in my throat.
We ate our meal and spoke of life and love,
and (though I heard your voice and saw your smile)
the evening passed without my thinking of
much more than how you always are in style.
The gorgeous thing you'd wrapped around your neck
apparently kept making me "a wreck."


Last edited by bruce_hh on Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:59 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I 'correctly' inserted a comma after the phrase "life and love" xxx)
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PostSubject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158   Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:30 pm

Another jewel Bruce Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158   Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:49 am

Yes, Bruce, a real gem! Your poem had me in stitches! Good job!
Your friend,
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PostSubject: Re: Bruce's 'Original' Sonnet #158   Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:48 am

Dear **Steve** & Dear **David**: The gems
supportive of truth skirt our hems.
My ablest pajamas
now practice all dramas
that link wondrous research to stems.

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