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 OUT IN THE FIELD WITH LOVE

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antropolis



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PostSubject: OUT IN THE FIELD WITH LOVE   Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:48 pm

The little cares that fretted her,
She lost them yesterday,
Among the fields above the sea,
Among the winds at play.
Among the lowing of the herds,
The rustling of the trees,
Among the singing of the birds,
The humming of the bees.
The foolish fears of what might pass,
She cast them all away.
Among the clover-scented grass,
Among the new-mown hay,
Among the husking of the corn
Where drowsy poppies nod,
Where ill thoughts die and good are born--
Out in the fields with Love.
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PostSubject: Re: OUT IN THE FIELD WITH LOVE   Mon Dec 05, 2011 4:45 am

Dear **Scott**: With rich rhyming plus meter
you seemingly turned on a heater.
That 'thing' is no gun
but (rather) the fun
inherent when bliss ain't a cheater.

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Carol Perroni



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PostSubject: Re: OUT IN THE FIELD WITH LOVE   Mon Dec 05, 2011 5:31 am

A good poem, Scott! Very Happy

I like the idea of love being carefree and creating good emotions.

You have some nice summer imagery in this poem. flower

Best,
Carol
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PostSubject: Re: OUT IN THE FIELD WITH LOVE   Mon Dec 05, 2011 11:36 pm

Scott,
Such nice images you have created here, a very moving and positive poem!
Your friend,
David
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