annaneen

Number of posts: 44 Age: 66 Location: Newport S.Wales, but proudly Scottish Points: 102 Registration date: 2011-08-30
 | Subject: The Old Miner Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:46 pm | |
| The Old Miner
He turned to us before he died and said there isn't any 'later'. He knew that he was on his way to be with his lord – his maker.
But before I go, I need you to know how much you meant to me. For Mum and you kids, were my whole world when I came home from the sea.
I wasn't a miner all of my life it merely paid the bills. Before that I was on the high seas It gave me my share of thrills.
And, after the war, when I demobbed I was glad to be with you again. It had been the thought of you all 'back home' that had helped to keep me sane.
Though I had talents - I sang and I painted. Like most of my generation, I had to find work that could keep us not get ideas above my station.
And so I went deep, deep underground it wasn't very nice. But what else is a man to do when he needs work – at any price.
More money would have improved our lives, although we didn't live in a hovel. But the only skill I was expected to show was wielding a pick and shovel.
I drew coal dust deep into my lungs, And worked on my knees in water. to have enough money to feed us my wife, my sons and my daughters.
And now that my time is over I think it's been well spent. When I see you standing tall before me, I can go now and feel quite content.
© Ian Lumley
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davidf
Number of posts: 1799 Points: 1579 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:39 pm | |
| Ian L., Thios is brilliant! Welcome back to Potic Skies! I missed you! /Your friend, David Fox |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4431 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4928 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Mon Dec 05, 2011 4:26 am | |
| Dear **Ian**: Those lines rich in glory are tellers of no sorry story. You seem to have dwelt where passion helps pelt all moments with rips downright roary. |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Mon Dec 05, 2011 6:40 pm | |
| A lovely tale Enjoyed the read _________________   |
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Ian Russell

Number of posts: 157 Age: 80 Location: Alloa,Clackmannanshire Points: 290 Registration date: 2008-10-28
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:02 pm | |
| A beautifully crafted piece of writing full of deep feeling loved the read Ian R. |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:51 am | |
| A poignant tale... that every person has had a life.. more than what you see at first.. and though sad at the end... you showed his worth. |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 682 Points: 761 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: The Old Miner Fri Dec 16, 2011 4:26 am | |
| A story well told about a life well lived, Ian I enjoyed reading your poem. Best, Carol |
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