bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4431 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4928 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Bruce's Redoing of Shakespeare's Sonnet #39 Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:31 am | |
| Shakespeare's Sonnet #39 [Redone by Bruce Hamilton]
How can I sweetly sing of your sweet ways, when you remain the source of all my grace? How can my praising me not breed much haze? Yet: praising you, don't I praise my own face? For just such reasons, let's dwell far apart and let our love soon lose its single name, and in that separation I may start to give your heart its necessary fame. (O, absence, what a "torment" you'd soon prove if your sour leisure didn't give flesh leave to while away the time with thoughts that move the mind toward bliss -- though time and thought deceive! For: yearnings, though they help split worlds in two, bring many a gorgeous image back in view.) |
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