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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Mon Oct 10, 2011 8:12 am | |
| THE RED WHEELBARROW (by William Carlos Williams)
so much depends upon
a red wheel barrow
glazed with rain water
beside the white chickens
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THE PINKISH CONDOM (by B.H.)
So much pivots upon
one pink- ish condom
honed by factory friction
and now in some pocket |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 681 Points: 760 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Tue Oct 11, 2011 7:20 pm | |
| An interesting parody, Bruce
Certainly something to ponder |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:19 am | |
| Dear **Carol**: Such texts (though quite small) might seem to create their own squall. I felt so effusive I managed abusive results in a style from some mall. |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 681 Points: 760 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:12 am | |
| Oh! Now I think I understand!
Americans love to rely on shock appeal |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:57 am | |
| Dear **Carol**: Your point is well taken, since this is a nation forsaken. I stumble and mumble while meaning to fumble, and soon every 'concept' seems shaken. |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1254 Points: 1572 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:14 pm | |
| It is interesting that rubber or plastics Are often fashioned into prophylactics Yet are you aware That one can go bare At least that is often my tactics _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:37 pm | |
| Dear **Steve**: I am one of those folk who 'thrives' because rubber once broke. I've gathered, however, that facts now persever implying that worlds crave HOT POKE. |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 681 Points: 760 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:37 am | |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:42 am | |
| Dear **Carol**: Thanks (MUCH) for that 'drawing' -- which almost might cause my full thawing! Viagra (I gather) is good for a lather that rips every moment toward RAW-ING!!!!! |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Fri Oct 14, 2011 10:39 pm | |
| I am reading and learning .... |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 681 Points: 760 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Fri Oct 14, 2011 10:53 pm | |
| Read on crushed rose.....! Don't hesitate to join in!! Dear **Bruce:** Maybe you'll take the hint that you might be needing a supplement, in order to keep up with your fracas of claiming star  stud-muffin status |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:07 am | |
| Dear **Carol**: I need all the help implicit in kelps that can whelp. My organized manner soon proves I'm a spanner on bridges produced by Gym Phelp. |
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antropolis

Number of posts: 878 Age: 37 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 1586 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:36 pm | |
| Hey Bruce thank you for posting William Carlos Williams' The Red Wheelbarrow. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed reading your parody The Pinkish Condom. Good poem. ~Scott |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 681 Points: 760 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:32 pm | |
| So much depends upon
so much rudeness and whether you
are considered obnoxious
and left alone |
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bruce_hh

Number of posts: 4421 Age: 64 Location: Monterey, California, U.S.A. Points: 4914 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:37 am | |
| Dear **Scott** & Dear **Carol**: I grapple with comments like those, then eat apple. Manhattan (a city?) now garners some pity for dealing with horses I dapple. |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger" Tue Nov 15, 2011 6:54 am | |
| certainly an interesting parody..  |
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