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 My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"

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bruce_hh



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PostSubject: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Mon Oct 10, 2011 8:12 am

THE RED WHEELBARROW (by William Carlos Williams)


so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


********************************************************

THE PINKISH CONDOM (by B.H.)


So much pivots
upon

one pink-
ish condom

honed by
factory friction

and now in
some pocket
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Tue Oct 11, 2011 7:20 pm

An interesting parody, Bruce

Certainly something to ponder
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:19 am

Dear **Carol**: Such texts (though quite small)
might seem to create their own squall.
I felt so effusive
I managed abusive
results in a style from some mall.

Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:12 am

Oh! Now I think I understand!

Americans love to rely on shock appeal
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:57 am

Dear **Carol**: Your point is well taken,
since this is a nation forsaken.
I stumble and mumble
while meaning to fumble,
and soon every 'concept' seems shaken.

I love you
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:14 pm

It is interesting that rubber or plastics
Are often fashioned into prophylactics
Yet are you aware
That one can go bare
At least that is often my tactics

Wink

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Steve
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:37 pm

Dear **Steve**: I am one of those folk
who 'thrives' because rubber once broke.
I've gathered, however,
that facts now persever
implying that worlds crave HOT POKE.

Question
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:42 am

Dear **Carol**: Thanks (MUCH) for that 'drawing' --
which almost might cause my full thawing!
Viagra (I gather)
is good for a lather
that rips every moment toward RAW-ING!!!!!

Question
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Fri Oct 14, 2011 10:39 pm

I am reading and learning .... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Fri Oct 14, 2011 10:53 pm

Read on crushed rose.....!
Don't hesitate to join in!!


Dear **Bruce:**
Maybe you'll take the hint
that you might be needing a supplement,
in order to keep up with your fracas
of claiming star Like a Star @ heaven stud-muffin status Wink

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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:07 am

Dear **Carol**: I need all the help
implicit in kelps that can whelp.
My organized manner
soon proves I'm a spanner
on bridges produced by Gym Phelp.

Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:36 pm

Hey Bruce thank you for posting William Carlos Williams' The Red Wheelbarrow. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed reading your parody The Pinkish Condom. Good poem. ~Scott
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:32 pm

So much depends
upon

so much rudeness
and whether you

are considered
obnoxious

and left
alone
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:37 am

Dear **Scott** & Dear **Carol**: I grapple
with comments like those, then eat apple.
Manhattan (a city?)
now garners some pity
for dealing with horses I dapple.

What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: My Other ~Parody~ on/of a William Carlos Williams "Humdinger"   Tue Nov 15, 2011 6:54 am

certainly an interesting parody.. Smile
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