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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: APRIL CHALLENGE Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:04 am | |
| Rose will set the challenge for April.
Good luck to all. |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:45 pm | |
| Hi, everyone .. I've had a think and I would like everyone to write about their favourite place, either to visit, or an everyday place and of course ... if you have more than one favourite place, then you can write more than one poem |
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Val

Number of posts: 1464 Age: 69 Location: Devon Points: 1386 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:53 am | |
| A Secret Place
Under the trees along the track (Fields and moorland back to back) In the dappled shade and light Myriad insects dance in flight Walk the path to the centre place And there be lost in time and space An ancient quarry, wild, overgrown Nature has claimed it for her own Derelict buildings open to sky While up above the Buzzards fly Some strange creature in the stream Weed covered ripples all that's seen Wild deer warily slake their thirst The rabbits probably came here first Moorland ponies stay to crop Grass that grows among the rock Willows have colonized the quarry base A wildlife haven, a Secret Place.
Val. _________________  Regards Val |
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Val

Number of posts: 1464 Age: 69 Location: Devon Points: 1386 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:56 am | |
| Pannier Market
Granite stone and brick archway support The roof, high like a barn, Beams crisscross the vaulted ceiling This building has age and rugged charm. For over a thousand years, this market has thrived When a Charter was granted to sell In the year of 1105, Cattle, sheep, horses and geese as well Now modern goods are on display Where once a different scene was played Books and jewelery, here to buy Bric-a-Brac, crafts and clothing arrayed A friendly people sell and buy This market voted the best In the year 2004, this was A head above the rest.
Val
Both the above poems posted a fair while ago, in another place, but they seemed appropriate to this challenge. _________________  Regards Val |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:19 pm | |
| Two very good, and different poems, Val well done for a good start to the April challenge
Rose x |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:21 pm | |
| Far from the maddening crowds people near silent in their absence though their motorway is loud sound bouncing from far off hill back across these green fields I regularly traverse at will drawn down to the riverside to follow the water as it flows meandering shallow and wide where ducks sleep at the edge of the raised gravel bed, while moorhens scoot under overhanging hedge and swans swim at their stately pace until the riverbank narrows with steps to make the river race through channels where it was sent to harness the power of water ere the mill wheel’s use was spent and the aged stone walls of the mill withstand the test of time though the wooden wheel is not there still remains of the wheelhouse can be seen beyond the weir, partly hidden now in a fresh blanket of natural green
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Mon May 09, 2011 8:29 pm | |
| I loved the visions of the pannier market, so Eunice, you must be the winner.  Big hugs and let's move on to May.. with your inspirations xx congratulations!! |
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Eunice Perkins

Number of posts: 2668 Location: New Zealand Points: 2329 Registration date: 2008-11-06
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Tue May 10, 2011 10:32 am | |
| Sorry, Gilly. Wrong person. The winner is obviously Val. |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: APRIL CHALLENGE Tue May 10, 2011 1:51 pm | |
| I must apologise.. I don't know what happened there!
Congratulations VAL!
Goodness you even wrote two poems Val, and I couldnt get it right!
Once again, apologies. |
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