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PostSubject: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:08 am

...


Past flowers of life
Lay at their best
Roses crushed
Neatly pressed

Till you exploded
Back into life
Sparkling eyes
Future wife

Turned into
A climbing rose
Who knows what?
Our future holds

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:32 am

A poem full of optimism and hope. I hope this is real life for you, Steve.
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:06 am

Loved this and hope it is true Go on tell us

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PostSubject: reply   Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:46 am

does this one mean we all need to buy a hat Very Happy
really lovely wording

huggs
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:20 am

Wow- this sounds promising...what a wonderfully optimistic poem. I so hope this is a slice of your present life......!

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:32 pm

Another good poem Steve! ~Scott
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:11 pm

Whatever it holds, we'll meet it together Smile

and I'll try not to turn into a rambling rose Laughing

Rose Xx
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:41 am

Rose, do your words mean what I think they mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:22 pm

Well, Eunice ....I suppose that depends what you are thinking Very Happy

but if you are thinking what I think you are thinking Smile

Steve and I are getting married on the 8th October ...and definitely no hats, lol, as I can never keep them on Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:34 pm

wonderful news Rose and Steve/ I'll remember that date as it is Finley's Birthday

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:35 pm

wonderful news Rose and Steve/ I'll remember that date as it is Finley's Birthday

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Thu Sep 09, 2010 10:56 pm

I shall remember to wish Finley a happy birthday.

Steve coincidence Riggs Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:27 pm

Well I loved this poem so I have chosen it as POEM OF THE WEEK> ACtgually I only chose it as I want a peice ot he wedding cake LOL and Finley does too.

anyway Congratulations Steve

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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:10 pm

Thank you Doreen, it was a good date to have chosen, obviously Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Uncrushed   Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:00 am

A lovely poem, and congratulations Rose and Steve. Wonderful news!! flower
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