Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1254 Points: 1572 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Reigning in cats and dogs Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:05 pm | |
| A poem written for a challenge elsewhere... Using the words, cat, dog, ball, elf, wish, well. ... Cool green feline eyes, unnoticed, unseen A cat tail flicks in anticipation While the hapless canine starts his routine Of dog and ball in unification Again, and again he jumps and catches Demonstrating, and refining his skill She pads her paws, flexes claws, and scratches Muscles now taut, as she waits for the kill
She pounces so fast, appears as a blur Grabs at his tail as it swings in mid swish That mischievous elf covered in fur Managed to fulfil her kittenish wish
She saunters off, knowing she has done well Nonchalantly he stops, to sniff a smell ... _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:32 pm | |
| a sonnet to an oblivious dog and a cheeky cat, no less ! is there no subject that you cannot produce a sonnet for ?
Rose x |
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Eunice Perkins

Number of posts: 2664 Location: New Zealand Points: 2325 Registration date: 2008-11-06
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:46 am | |
| I can almost hear her purring with satisfaction, Steve. |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:04 am | |
| Just purr fect Steve Loved it _________________   |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:18 am | |
| Well you doggedly managed to achieve this without catastrophe - a clever poem. I liked it.
Jo x |
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antropolis

Number of posts: 876 Age: 37 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 1582 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:31 pm | |
| That was good Steve! ~Scott |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: Reigning in cats and dogs Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:10 am | |
| I liked this poem, but it's obviously not based on my cat as she even runs away from birds. |
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