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 Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)

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PostSubject: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:43 pm

(This poem is also a dedication to my girlfriend, Debbie, the one I wrote "A Love Poem" for.)
You are pretty, you are wise,
You are beautiful in my eyes
It's no doubt, it's no surprise,
You're my number one,
You're my "first prize"*
I love you so much, I want you to realize
That you're beautiful in my eyes.

~Davidf
*This line only means I love her more than anything else, I know she is no object or anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:49 pm

Lovely David she sounds a very special lady

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:05 pm

* David I think we know by now that you are a more spiritual person than materialistic lol

Steve being objective Riggs Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:33 pm

you didn't need the additional explanation, your poem said it all

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:54 am

Those are the words of true love, David. I hope she feels the same so that you will be a couple united for life.
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:17 am

Your feelings for this lady are overwhelming in the poem and I am sure it is beautiful set to music.

Lucky lady. I hope all goes well for you both!

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful In My Eyes (Inspired by Joshua Kadison's song)   Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:37 am

A beautiful poem too, she must be proud of you.
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