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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1224 Points: 1147 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:33 pm | |
| Jo will set the challenge for September.
good luck everyone. |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:44 pm | |
| The challenge this week is addiction. This can be keeping fit, chocoholics, carbohydrates, reading, certain music - or more serious topics - even straying into obsession. However you want to interpret it..... Looking forward to seeing your responses. Jo x |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Is Writing an Addiction? Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:38 pm | |
| Is Writing Poetry an addiction?
Even when I’m laid in bed Words they go round in my head. For I write poems when I’m asleep Well it’s much better than counting sheep. Yet when I wake, my poems are gone As I don’t remember the words, not one. I know that I should write them down Those words, which could be verbs or nouns
So the right word I do choose My dictionary is always close I often do forget the time If I’m looking for a word to rhyme. My writing book is always near So it great to see a verse appear I watch TV as I write words down Then I see my poem has grown
Different things I write about Sometimes I could scream and shout I write about nature, family and friends As my thoughts they never end I think it must be an addiction with me For sometimes I won’t stop for tea. Yet my poetry writing is my muse And it certainly keeps me amused
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Is writing poetry an addiction? Doreen E Hampshire _________________   |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: colour Addiction Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:48 pm | |
| The colour Red RED is my colour, Everything is RED Even the covers on my bed. If my husband sends roses They are RED of course. And when I have chips I use RED sauce. My favourite story is RED Riding Hood. I'd even wear Bright RED shoes If I could. My house is also painted RED And if pencils were coloured I would have RED lead. When my children are happy. Their faces are RED I also have RED Hair, on top of my head. I have a RED suitcase For my holidays But I'll change my mind soon As it's only a phase. What colour will I choose next. _________________   |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:49 pm | |
| A couple of poems about addictions JO. _________________   |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1196 Points: 1498 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:29 pm | |
| Well consider yourself READ Doreen _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:14 am | |
| Doreen. Thank you for two excellent and innovative contributions. Your poetry is just getting better and better.
And yes, I do think writing is an addiction! I love the idea of a writing book - what a good idea! I also loved the poem about RED.
Looking forward to seeing some more poems.
Jo x |
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Rowan Hicks

Number of posts: 219 Age: 60 Location: Gloucestershire, England Points: 333 Registration date: 2009-01-26
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:22 pm | |
| Well, here's an addiction suffered by women everywhere, if one may stoop so low as to make a sexist point.
Basket Case
Isn't it nice in here! The warmth! Perhaps I'll meet the Johnsons again..? Yes, I think I'll have that.
And I MUST have one of those - Buy one, get one free! Wonder what's in it? Never mind.
Isn't it lovely in here! The bright lights! Ladies and Gentleman, Today at our delicatessen...
Ooh, and THAT looks nice! Free, extra and ten percent new. Wonder what time it is? Why's there never a clock? No matter.
Isn't it nice in here! The soft music! What did I actually need?... and... Do I really have to go home..?
© Rowan Hicks |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1196 Points: 1498 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:07 pm | |
| I have a twenty minute limit Rowan, then I go into a coma.
Yet I can always remember where I have parked the car.
Steve floor three next to the fifth pillar Riggs. _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1196 Points: 1498 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Giving you up Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:12 pm | |
| Giving you up, (three poems in one)
You are the habit, I had so long Hard to change, but I must be strong Smoke one last cigarette, throw the pack away If I can just get through this first hard day Giving it up, those filter tips Already I miss your touch on my lips The first day goes well, no smoke, no fire Still feeling your overwhelming desire I keep telling myself, it’s not healthy That feeling which burns deep inside of me Friends tell me they are proud, I am doing well Is it over now, how can I tell The longing has gone, craving all passed Heavy breath, confined to the past.
_________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:34 pm | |
| good one Steve I liked this _________________   |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:54 am | |
| Well Rowan, a good poem - but I think quite a few of we women want to get out of supermarkets quickly and I have seen several lingering males there....seriously though, really amusing reading.
Steve, well done for giving up smoking and for your account whcih shows so clearly the difficulties. I liked the blue lines showing the temptation to give in with the black lines showing the resolve. It worked well.
Jo x
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:14 am | |
| Rown I also like your poem but I think you have us women wrong I am like Jo, In and out as soon as I can. I never linger (LOL) _________________   |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1196 Points: 1498 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:29 am | |
| If you read between the lines Jo.... this was about giving up smoking, but also about giving up a love.
Steve ambiguous Riggs ;-)
_________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:22 am | |
| Thanks, Steve.
Love your complexities and sorry I didn't spot it initially.
Jo x |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| I really liked all of the poems but the winner has to be Steve for his cleverness in his poem about giving up smoking - and a love.
Jo x |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:55 am | |
| good one Steve. a good choice Jo _________________   |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1224 Points: 1147 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:34 pm | |
| Congratulations Steve.. and over to you for the October challenge. Gilly |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:35 pm | |
| Gilly he will be busy He's getting married on Friday I bet is is on a Wedding Theme LOL _________________   |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1196 Points: 1498 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: SEPTEMBER CHALLENGE Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:03 pm | |
| OK, LOL, you asked for it _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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