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PostSubject: Sweat   Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:01 am

Sweat.

Fan blades turn
Each in succession
Struggle to stave
This humid oppression

Eyelids as heavy
As the air that surrounds
Tossing and turning
For sleep, which confounds

Oh’ for a breeze
A sweet cooling storm
Restless in heat
Night sultry, and warm


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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:44 am

and every year I threaten to buy an air conditioning unit ....maybe this year Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:37 pm

It certainly has been hot this summer- goodness knows what it is like in the USA!! I often end up sleeping on top of the bedclothes!

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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:50 pm

Dear Rose,
I always suggest you take off those wincyette pyjamas...
But do you listen

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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:53 pm

Yes I often end up sleeping on top too Jo.

Steve in my dreams Riggs.

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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:59 am

Oh I can relate to this STeve. Feet sticking out of the bedclothes, sleeping on top of bedclothes

enjoyed the poem thanks Steve

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PostSubject: Re: Sweat   Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:52 am

Another good poem Steve! ~Scott
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