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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:22 pm | |
| He looked at me There was silence His eyes lowered
And I recalled His small body in my arms Just 12 weeks old And we locked eyes And all his needs were simple.
I sighed.
He caught the sound And glanced up Our eyes met But there was wealth Of confusion Of conflicting emotions In that look As he is torn between Loyalties of the past And loyalties of the present
I put my hand out And he embraced me Then he pulled back Eyes lowered Then they met mine The clock ticked loudly The cat brushed against my legs “Don’t worry, “ he said, “It’ll be allright Mum.”
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:41 pm | |
| Lovely poem and very emotional Jo. Is this about your son leaving home? Going to Uni or when he got married. I can feel your heartache Jo but it is a superb poem _________________   |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:19 pm | |
| Oh thank you, Doreen. It is about his life now really - glad it came across OK.
Jo x |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| A totally emotion filled piece ...it was so easy to make things better for them when they were little nowadays we have to content ourselves with being there for them if they need us - being a Mum is hard, Jo
Rose xx
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1254 Points: 1572 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:16 pm | |
| Sometimes cats can be as perceptive as poets can't they Jo. _________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:18 pm | |
| Thank you so much for your support Rose and Steve. Yes being a Mum is very hard sometimes, Rose. He is lovely though! And yes cats are perceptive, Steve! You have all cheered me up no end.
Jo x |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:10 pm | |
| Congratulations Jo, Your poem is POEM of THE WEEK for July 16th A wonderful poem, so emotionally and a typical poem from a MUM. _________________   |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:24 pm | |
| Congratulations on poem of the week, Jo
this poem deserves it, there is so much emotion in your write I hope things are better now
Rose x |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: Complexity Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:53 am | |
| Thank you Rose and for your kind thoughts too.
Jo x |
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jimmy1
Number of posts: 243 Age: 67 Location: blackpool Points: 300 Registration date: 2008-10-23
 | Subject: complexity Tue Jul 20, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| well done jo like this one jimmy |
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