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Jo Cursley



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PostSubject: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:22 pm

He looked at me
There was silence
His eyes lowered

And I recalled
His small body in my arms
Just 12 weeks old
And we locked eyes
And all his needs were simple.

I sighed.

He caught the sound
And glanced up
Our eyes met
But there was wealth
Of confusion
Of conflicting emotions
In that look
As he is torn between
Loyalties of the past
And loyalties of the present

I put my hand out
And he embraced me
Then he pulled back
Eyes lowered
Then they met mine
The clock ticked loudly
The cat brushed against my legs
“Don’t worry, “ he said,
“It’ll be allright Mum.”


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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:41 pm

Lovely poem and very emotional Jo. Is this about your son leaving home? Going to Uni or when he got married. I can feel your heartache Jo but it is a superb poem

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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:19 pm

Oh thank you, Doreen. It is about his life now really - glad it came across OK.

Jo x
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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:03 pm

A totally emotion filled piece ...it was so easy to make things better for them when they were little
nowadays we have to content ourselves with being there for them if they need us - being a Mum is hard, Jo

Rose xx
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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:16 pm

Sometimes cats can be as perceptive as poets can't they Jo.

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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:18 pm

Thank you so much for your support Rose and Steve. Yes being a Mum is very hard sometimes, Rose. He is lovely though! And yes cats are perceptive, Steve!
You have all cheered me up no end.

Jo x
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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:10 pm

Congratulations Jo, Your poem is POEM of THE WEEK for July 16th

A wonderful poem, so emotionally and a typical poem from a MUM.

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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:24 pm

Congratulations on poem of the week, Jo

this poem deserves it, there is so much emotion in your write
I hope things are better now

Rose x
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PostSubject: Re: Complexity   Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:53 am

Thank you Rose and for your kind thoughts too.

Jo x
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PostSubject: complexity   Tue Jul 20, 2010 1:37 pm

well done jo like this one jimmy
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