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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: July Challenge Fri Jul 02, 2010 7:03 am | |
| In July 1908, SOS became the international distress call, so in honour of this, the theme for July's challenge is:
Help
A poem about this please - plenty of scope for a variety of interpretations. Can't wait to read them!
Jo x |
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:54 am | |
| Thank you for setting the theme for July, Jo. I look forward to reading the entries. and good luck everyone. Gilly |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:36 pm | |
| Catch as catch can As children zoom in and out Round and loop Laughing and shrieking While in the corner Behind the trees A child cries Who is there to help?
A crowd of adults laugh and joke And though the crying Is louder now No one helps
A man mows the churchyard lawn The whirring machine Scatters grass A flock of sparrows Chitter chat And still the child’s cries Wend around the corner
It is late afternoon A solitary tramp Finishes his knife sharpening round And stops by the tree In the shade
He hears a sniffle behind the trunk And pauses “Hello?” The cry subsides. “Can I help?”
The small child emerges “I am lost,” a whimpering voice “Me too,” says the tramp. “Perhaps we can help each other.”
Perhaps.
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:37 pm | |
| I thought I would start the ball rolling. Look forward to reading some more soon. Jox |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| this is very good, Jo ....hard to follow!
Rose x |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:51 pm | |
| But please do all of you! Look forward to reading them soon.
Jo x |
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Steve Admin

Number of posts: 1254 Points: 1572 Registration date: 2009-03-23
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:34 pm | |
| Iceberg hit Dit, dit, dit Blue star Dah, dah, dah Titanic Dit, dit, dit
Sinking ship Dit, dit, dit Land too far Dah, dah, dah Atlantic Dit, dit, dit
Each wave breaks Pitches, and rolls The radio cries Save our souls
Lifeboats launched With a splash Dot, dot, dot Dash, dash, dash
And as the cold seas Ebbed, and flowed The radio cries out In morse code
_________________ Steve www.noaddress.co.uk
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:25 pm | |
| Loved it, Steve. What a great contribution. Thanks.
Jo x |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2569 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2394 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:01 pm | |
| Good one Steve. _________________   |
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Rowan Hicks

Number of posts: 219 Age: 61 Location: Gloucestershire, England Points: 333 Registration date: 2009-01-26
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:49 pm | |
| Most dangers appear in a trice. And no, it's not usually nice - Take those on Titanic - They froze in a panic When waiters called out 'who's for ice?'
Or Pompeii's for example the stuff. Its people went up in a puff - Before they could say 'no' The local volcano Decided enough was enough.
So, if one assumes one must shout, Of clamour and screams there's this doubt: It might be salvation's Just imagination - It might be, of time, one is... out.
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:32 am | |
| Really witty, Rowan. Thanks for entering. Loved it!
Jo x |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1282 Points: 1506 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:48 pm | |
| a late entry ....
Stuck on the motorway in a downpour of rain Engine has stopped and won’t go again It’s dark, cold and wet, and I’m on my own On the hard shoulder, looking for a phone
Traffic rushes by at a dizzying pace I feel as if I’m caught in an F1 race But it’s worse when there’s no car in sight And I can’t see my way in the black of night
The phone seems miles away from my car Though in daylight it wouldn’t be very far Thankfully I reach it, call the RAC SOS, please come out and rescue me
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:27 pm | |
| A dread scenario on the motorway! The stuff of nightmares and very vividly written.
Thanks Rose!
I will make my choice late tonight to give the chance for anymore late entries. Thanks so much to all who entered.
Jo x |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2343 Age: 62 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 2027 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:11 am | |
| I really liked all the entries this month! However after some deliberation I choose Steve's as the winner. I really liked the interspersal of the morse code within the oncoming terrible results of the disaaster.
Well done, Steve. Now it is your turn to choose a theme.
Look forward to it!
Jo x
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Gilly J

Number of posts: 1251 Points: 1178 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: Re: July Challenge Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:52 am | |
| well done everyone and congratulations Steve!! |
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