Gilly J

Number of posts: 1224 Points: 1147 Registration date: 2008-10-21
 | Subject: MAY CHALLENGE Wed May 05, 2010 5:47 pm | |
| Congratulations Eunice, on winning the challenge... and she has set the topic for May as 'Storms'. |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1247 Points: 1465 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Storm Wed May 05, 2010 7:15 pm | |
|  Storm Thunder grumbles and rolls around Last night's rain runs over bone dry ground A sudden crash Lightning flash Over our heads, makes hair stand on end New water torrents add to the awe full blend Lonely bridge stands over brimming pool No lifeguard today to save any fool Who would brave these ferocious elements, This demonstration of wrath which the sky presents Then, though rain sheets down, black cloud moves away Taking with it glorious light streaked display |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 583 Points: 654 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Wed May 05, 2010 8:22 pm | |
| I love your poem, crushed rose! You've really captured the excitement and fear of a storm! A really neat photo, too! I was trying to figure out where it was~It looks like a tropical place with a bridge over a swimming pool in torrential rain. Maybe Egypt? An excellent write and an evocative poem! Best wishes, xxoo carol |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Wed May 05, 2010 10:01 pm | |
| A great poem and picture Rose Very atmospheric. _________________   |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1247 Points: 1465 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Sun May 09, 2010 9:06 pm | |
| Hi, Carol ..this was taken in Almeria, Spain, last October A proper tropical downpour, then it was baking hot for the rest of the week!
please you and Doreen liked it
Rose x |
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Rowan Hicks

Number of posts: 219 Age: 60 Location: Gloucestershire, England Points: 333 Registration date: 2009-01-26
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Wed May 19, 2010 10:30 am | |
| Here's one I've posted before which touches on the subject. The Light
Lost souls howl a lament Into the choking dark. Lonely headland, gale-lashed, Endures the stormy, night assault, Bears man's beacon into the void.
'Stand fast' is the message, As much as to warn away. 'This is ours; here we stay'. A lordship proclamation Beamed out to all comers.
A solitude of abandonment Throws forth its soulless spear, No keeper needed now to tend, To clean, oil or mend The brilliance.
No life nor limb set to risk But now an automatic task, The vigil, unrelenting. A lonely, lifeless light shines away, Away, into rain and snow.
The salt-whipped sentry glares A territorial insult at the black; Unyielding, the stance; Mocking, the stare. An insolent calm amid fury.
© Rowan Hicks |
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Eunice Perkins

Number of posts: 2611 Location: New Zealand Points: 2270 Registration date: 2008-11-06
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:00 am | |
| Only two entries this month, but two very good ones. It has been hard to choose between you, but I have chosen Rose's true-life account. Congratulations Rose. Your turn to set the subject for June. |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 2529 Age: 71 Location: HULL England Points: 2342 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:29 pm | |
| Good one Rose Enjoyed this _________________   |
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 1247 Points: 1465 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: MAY CHALLENGE Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:44 am | |
| I thought Rowan's was better and darker! |
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