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Gilly J



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PostSubject: January Challenge   Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:58 pm

The January challenge subject will be posted when Val has picked the winner for December who will choose it.

thanks Gilly
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:15 pm

Sorry Folks, have been busy.
Thank you all for your entries, it was a difficult decision to make.

After much though & deliberation,
I chose Rowan's poem.

Over to you, Rowan.

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Gilly J



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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:25 pm

Congratulations Rowan, and apologies too, as we haven't been able to get in touch with you.
So I have asked Val to pick another person to set the challenge for January.

Good luck everyone.
Gilly
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:49 pm

Thank you Gilly, I'll go back to December & reread them.

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:57 pm

Doreen, I have chosen yours to take Rowan's place as he doesn't seem to be around.
I did like it as well.
Congratulations & over to you.

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:39 am

So sorry Doreen, but as Rowan is back, I feel he should do the challenge as I did pick his poem first.

Rowan, Congratulations again & over to you.

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:58 pm

Ok, well, with apologies to all for a fumbling and very late start for January, I set the following as your challenge for the month:

FIRE

I thought this would help to keep us all warm...
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PostSubject: Fire   Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:15 pm

Fire

Behind the old disused gas fire
encrusted with soot jewels
no grate, no flame
a wish written in brief
maybe, maybe, maybe

Restoration possible
the phoenix rises once again
crackling sticks, glowing coals
a wish written in brief
could be, could be, could be

From embers left and promised made
time once again stood still
my room aglow with days gone by
an open fire of my own
a wish written in brief
was mine, was mine, was mine
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PostSubject: Dreaming by the fire   Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:46 pm

Dreaming by the fire

I’m sitting near a cosy fire, on long winter nights
Just watching dancing flames, orange and red lights
So close near the fire, I will just sit and dream
Not of the winter but a different scene.

I am dreaming of the forthcoming spring
When all snow has gone and I hear birds sing
I also dream of flowers sprouting from the ground
With a profusion of colourful blossom all around.

Now I dream of golden days and the changing trees
Watching as the autumn leaves are swaying in the breeze
I dream of red roses and a walk by the sea
As I sit near the fire, that’s where I’d love to be.

I know we must have the seasons as they appear
Even if some of them do fill you with despair.
So as I sit and dream near my warm fire
I still do wish our cold winter will soon expire

Doreen E Hampshire

From the Icy Grip of Britain January 2010

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PostSubject: FIRE   Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:58 pm

FIRE




Time to light the fire
To get cozy and warm
Don't sit too close to the fire
The sparks will cause you hrm

Let the flame embrace you
Cozy up to the heat
Let yourself drift off to nap
And warm those tired chilly feet

The fireplace is full of wood
The embers burn with might
The colors of the giant flames
Are so brilliant and bright

Comfortable and cuddling
With a blanket by my side
I rest with such enjoyment
I let the fireside be my guide


Margaret Latter
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:32 pm

Just wanted to say Karen, your poem burned out all thoughts I had, excellent, not sure I can follow that. !
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Wed Jan 13, 2010 12:18 am

.
Roaring flames cause
Hapless shadows to dance
Light flickers manically
Upon these four walls

Your letter burns
Within my heart
Within the grate
Within my mind

Yet I feel the warmth
Of the fire
Of your love

It fills the room

Until I scrabble
Among cold ashes
Of despair

Try to save slivers
Burn my fingers on past love

Sleep restlessly
Heart and fingers throbbing
Into the loneliness of the night
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karen
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PostSubject: reply to steve   Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:46 am

well steve you managed to write a masterpiece as usual

I moved house recently and thats what we found behind a very old gas fire
and I love it, never had a real open fire before and it was something I had
wished for

huggs
karenxx
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Wed Jan 13, 2010 12:03 pm

All the poems here are brilliant.
I still can't write anything, though I have tried.

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:24 am

Fire!

"Fire!" they screamed as it seared the evening,
flames wild leaping toward the sky.
"Fire!" they yelled and ran for cover.
explosions heard by the passers-by.
Firetruck screeched along the highway,
shrieking news to the listening town,
carrying its load to quench the inferno,
water for raging blaze to drown.

He was the first man into the building,
explosion hit him with all its force.
They dragged him from the conflagration;
loss of comrade evoked remorse.
Years of fighting fires had ended,
fire, long his enemy and friend,
flame of life by fire extinguished,
fire victorious in the end.
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:32 am

Eunice, your poem is brilliant. Totally evokes the horror of a burning building & the brave fire fighter.

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Gilly J



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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:51 pm

Created From Smoke

He’d grown tired,
weary with words,
with writing,
reciting,
wanting only
silence,
blank page,
then in black rage,
he took his manuscripts,
made a bonfire,
burnt them,
every one
gone to ash,
smouldering pile
softly smoking,
upwardly unfurling,
mesmerising,
creating,
he was waiting,
took ink,
fresh paper,
inspired
anew.

Gilly Jones
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:44 pm

Wonderful Gilly Loved it

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:55 pm

Super poem, Gilly, I agree with Doreen.

There are so many lovely poems for January. Well done everyone.

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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:57 pm

To end all wars.

Catch twenty two
Being brave
Avoiding death
An early grave

They said a coward
Records, say it still
Wouldn’t fight
Maim or kill

Six in the morning
Last sunrise
Blindfold in place
To cover his eyes

Certain death
Going over the wire
Certain death
Ready, aim, fire…..
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PostSubject: message to Rowan   Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:40 pm

Hi Rowan, could you please choose a winner for this challenge

thanks
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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:50 am

I choose Eunice's effort which appeals to me as the start of something good.

I felt it could have gone further by a couple of verses as a narrative or retrospective on the fallen fireman - but then brevity appeals to me as well and I'm often accused of it!

The standard was generally appallingly high and you must all stop showing me up or I'll send the boys round...
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Gilly J



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PostSubject: Re: January Challenge   Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:25 pm

Thanks Rowan for judging the challenge, and congratulations Eunice!

I will make a link for the February challenge and look forward to reading Eunice's theme.
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