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davidf



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PostSubject: The Elves   Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:32 pm

Once upon a starry night
Some elves came out to play
They sang, they danced, they frolicked
And some might even say
They partied on til sunrise
Or until it was dawn
For at that very moment
I blinked and they were gone.
Elves are just imaginary,
That's what others say
But I know they're for real
For I saw them at play.

~David Fox
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PostSubject: Re: The Elves   Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:03 pm

I vaguely remember this David Nice one. Thanks for re-posting

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PostSubject: Re: The Elves   Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:26 pm

Magical write, David

so ...you saw them for yours elf Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Elves   Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:51 pm

I really like this poem, I like the atmosphere and the insistence that the elves DID come out and play, and nobody is allowed to deny it. Because elves DO come out and play, and reveal themselves to anybody who will give them a fair chance. (And I say this as a long-time lover of dwarves instead of elves, lol.)
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PostSubject: Re: The Elves   Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:18 am

I enjoyed that David. I don't remember reading it before, but I must have.
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PostSubject: Re: The Elves   Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:37 pm

Liked this one. I do remember it. It is good fun and well written.

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