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 The two edged sword.

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backstreetdreamer



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PostSubject: The two edged sword.   Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:56 am

I sat alone and looked out on a year of distant dreams
A sentinel of something good, at least that’s how it seems,
When as each year crept quietly away from all it knew
There felt such a sense of sameness, such a hint of deja-vu,
For all things come to he who waits, at least my Father said
And from a boy I prayed for them, before I went to bed,
But time was such a two edged sword that glittered on the night
It carved away my memories before they met the light.


Like melting ice on wind chimes that keep time with every drop
The years crept in and out of me, impossible to stop,
Just balls upon an abacus they slid forth one by one
And there was nothing left to say where time had been and gone,
My dreams felt just like fragrances of every day I’d met
Those drip-drop smells and wishing wells, those suns that never set,
Until at last I was a man, my moments told me so
As time picked up it’s pace again, and winds began to blow.


But wisdom creeps on velvet paws, so silent yet so deep
And gave me so much more to do, than sit alone and weep,
Unwinding past each darkened door, it lit the lamps again
Like an everlasting rainbow that comes dancing through the rain,
My dreams were quietly aglow, and drifted up once more
Awash with colours and with hopes, they came from every door,
And then I knew that looking back was dressed in faded smiles
So I turned upon the dreamer’s path, the future’s waiting miles…
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Steve



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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:21 pm

Your right Keith, its never too late to fulfil those dreams.
I've always wanted to see the pyramids, and I'm off to Egypt next month.
It may even inspire some poetry Wink
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crushed rose



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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:10 pm

Boy or man, you should never stop dreaming - if you don't dream, then how can dreams come true?

Rose x
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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:44 pm

Keith,
I really enjoyed this...it's the stuff that dreams are made of... Wink
Your friend,
David Fox
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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:21 am

Hang on to those dreams, Keith. It's not too late yet.
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PostSubject: reply   Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:10 pm

if we didnt have dreams to hold onto what would we have
but I sense more than just dreams unfolding in this piece

huggs
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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:16 pm

Another wonderful poem!

Yes, I agree that it's important to remember to keep our dreams alive. Very Happy

Sometimes it's just too easy to set them aside or to think that they belong to yesterday. Very Happy

Thank you!


xxoo carol
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PostSubject: Re: The two edged sword.   Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:42 am

You are right - look to the future to turn your dreams into reality. Beautifully written as ever with your silken words.
Jo
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