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Carol Perroni



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PostSubject: The Ocean In Winter   Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:24 pm

*
As we stand on ocean cliffs,
the wind sears through us
with its cold memories,
like the angles of ice
catching our warm feet
as we try to step over
the frozen cracks

The visit of snow
lying quietly on rounded inlets
can feel like the soft touch
of a hand over jagged rocks
glowing in the moonlight,
or bellowing loudly
out of a thunder hole,
slicing between the rocks
with its echoes

The wings of snowdrifts
rise like fingers
out into the circle of the ocean
filled with the riotous confetti
of snowflakes,
melting like laughter
into the whites of the
ocean’s blue green eyes

The waves whirling
the whitecaps around
like fingers moving
inside a magician’s
white gloved hands,
passing the magic
before our eyes

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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:40 am

That was good Carol! ~Scott
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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:00 am

A lovely poem about my favourite place to be. I enjoyed your poem very much, Carol.
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PostSubject: The ocean in winter.   Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:31 pm

Hello Carol, I know exactly where this poem came from, I have a cottage overlooking the harbour and sea in Whitby, on the North East coast of England, and I often sit in the conservatory and write poetry about the sea.. Beautifully written. Keith.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:38 pm

Thank you for your lovely comments! Very Happy

Keith~Your cottage sounds wonderful!...It sounds as if you have some beautiful views of the sea to inspire your poetry! Very Happy

The sea has always been a mystical place for me...each stretch of coastline is so very different...

I've also lived a good part of my life near coastal areas...

Best, xxoo carol sunny
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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:14 pm

Wonderful Carol, stunning views you give us A great poem

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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:19 pm

The sea and snow, combined with your words, give us an enchanting view through your eyes, Carol

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PostSubject: Re: The Ocean In Winter   Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:46 am

I loved the turning of natural images into hands and fingerts- it works well making the view sensual as well as visual, thus creating emotion within the poem.

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PostSubject: reply   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:09 pm

wonderful winter scene set by your artistic pen
another great poem carol thanks for sharing

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