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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 165 Points: 192 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: The Ocean In Winter Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:24 pm | |
| * As we stand on ocean cliffs, the wind sears through us with its cold memories, like the angles of ice catching our warm feet as we try to step over the frozen cracks
The visit of snow lying quietly on rounded inlets can feel like the soft touch of a hand over jagged rocks glowing in the moonlight, or bellowing loudly out of a thunder hole, slicing between the rocks with its echoes
The wings of snowdrifts rise like fingers out into the circle of the ocean filled with the riotous confetti of snowflakes, melting like laughter into the whites of the ocean’s blue green eyes
The waves whirling the whitecaps around like fingers moving inside a magician’s white gloved hands, passing the magic before our eyes
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antropolis

Number of posts: 203 Age: 35 Location: Garland, Tx Points: 409 Registration date: 2009-11-27
 | Subject: Re: The Ocean In Winter Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:40 am | |
| That was good Carol! ~Scott |
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Eunice Perkins

Number of posts: 1680 Location: New Zealand Points: 1337 Registration date: 2008-11-06
 | Subject: Re: The Ocean In Winter Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:00 am | |
| A lovely poem about my favourite place to be. I enjoyed your poem very much, Carol. |
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backstreetdreamer

Number of posts: 154 Points: 280 Registration date: 2008-11-19
 | Subject: The ocean in winter. Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:31 pm | |
| Hello Carol, I know exactly where this poem came from, I have a cottage overlooking the harbour and sea in Whitby, on the North East coast of England, and I often sit in the conservatory and write poetry about the sea.. Beautifully written. Keith. |
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Carol Perroni

Number of posts: 165 Points: 192 Registration date: 2008-12-27
 | Subject: Re: The Ocean In Winter Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:38 pm | |
| Thank you for your lovely comments! Keith~Your cottage sounds wonderful!...It sounds as if you have some beautiful views of the sea to inspire your poetry! The sea has always been a mystical place for me...each stretch of coastline is so very different... I've also lived a good part of my life near coastal areas... Best, xxoo carol  |
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Doreen Hampshire

Number of posts: 1397 Age: 69 Location: HULL England Points: 1075 Registration date: 2008-10-22
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crushed rose

Number of posts: 480 Points: 535 Registration date: 2009-08-29
 | Subject: Re: The Ocean In Winter Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:19 pm | |
| The sea and snow, combined with your words, give us an enchanting view through your eyes, Carol Rose x |
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Jo Cursley

Number of posts: 1328 Age: 60 Location: East Devon, UK Points: 1033 Registration date: 2008-10-22
 | Subject: Re: The Ocean In Winter Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:46 am | |
| I loved the turning of natural images into hands and fingerts- it works well making the view sensual as well as visual, thus creating emotion within the poem. Jo x |
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karen

Number of posts: 622 Age: 49 Location: Poetic Skies Points: 373 Registration date: 2008-10-17
 | Subject: reply Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:09 pm | |
| wonderful winter scene set by your artistic pen another great poem carol thanks for sharing
huggs karenxx |
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