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antropolis



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PostSubject: THE FALLING RAIN   Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:22 pm

When he sees the falling rain, his spirit soars transcending the intranscendental,
His mind levitates above the horizon,
When he hears the falling rain, he remembers 'yard' Jamaica, and zinc-roof-music,
Rain drops pianoing on his roof and forever going on and on

When he sees the falling rain he sees life, he sees blood rushing thru the veins
Of men under sheets initiating creation
For him, the rain symbolic of mother nature, characterizes prosperity--the
Paragon of ecological transformation

For each drop of rain that trickles down and then lingers in the leaves,
Escaping to the earth below bears an element of life,
Invaluable though it might seem, undoubtedly is a torch of life, evoking life
Today and tomorrow, a seed is germinated, flowers bloom, and in the womb
Of a mother cling someone's wife

When he hears the falling rain, he feels romantically inclined with nature,
For his inspiration floweth infinitely, as he writes a song verse by verse
As he hears the thunder crack its whip across the sky, he remembers the Almighty,
Who created the universe

When he sees the falling rain, he knows he's alive 'cause he exists in the co-existence
Of the infinity
He can feel, laugh, play, sing and dance; when he can no longer see the falling rain,
Then he's transcending beyond the spirit world...Eternally,
But the rain will keep falling, as life keeps rolling, and so shall be the two
Existing indefinitely....
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PostSubject: Re: THE FALLING RAIN   Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:25 pm

Scott,

I like your poem about the falling rain.

I like to do some meditations on the falling rain, too, but since it doesn't rain very much out here in
New Mexico I'm getting a little bit dry on the subject! Neutral

Best, carol sunny
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PostSubject: Re: THE FALLING RAIN   Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:28 am

Rain pianoing on the roof......I love that phrase. wonderful poem, Scott. You are a prolific writer.
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PostSubject: Re: THE FALLING RAIN   Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:40 pm

Another poem Scott Wow you are working hard. Rain I see plenty of that A good poem

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PostSubject: reply   Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:06 pm

you paint a wonderful image here Scott, excellent
descriptive powers throughout,
excellent indeed

huggs
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PostSubject: Re: THE FALLING RAIN   Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:33 pm

There is something about heavy rain that makes one feel part of the elements, this is good, Scott
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PostSubject: Re: THE FALLING RAIN   Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:22 pm

I agree that rain is very powerful to watch, and certainly makes you part of nature when you are out in it!

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