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PostSubject: Stones   Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:34 pm



A temple carved into a limestone hill
Pillars of granite adorn the facade
Centuries later they remain there still
Reminders of the glory Pharaoh had
Huge boulders lay haphazardly around
Excavated in the search for the past
Temporarily strewn across the ground
Damaged when Nile waters ran high and fast

That great river, now tamed, runs gently by
Small wavelets lapping on the rocky shore
Beneath the shallows, smaller stones still lie
In the depths, eroded, are thousands more

Polished round by water, gradually
Pebbles of stone flow down toward the sea
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PostSubject: Re: Stones   Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:05 pm

This poem is great especially with the wonderful photograph. You really had a good time in Egypt. It must all have been awe inspiring.

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PostSubject: Re: Stones   Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:21 pm

It was, Jo, and we have hundreds of photos, every so often a poem comes to mind, and then an excuse to post the pic Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Stones   Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:45 pm

When we were in Egypt we were very over awed, but slowly the poetry solidifies. Another good poem my sonnet Queen

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PostSubject: Re: Stones   Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:57 am

That was good Rose! ~Scott
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PostSubject: reply   Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:56 pm

excellent descriptive poem rose
I love also finding pebbles that are
rounded by water or sea, the photo
really enhanced the poem

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PostSubject: Re: Stones   Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:22 pm

thank you, Karen ...I was thinking of the pebbles and gravel in our local river, and how they were once big stones

Steve, my sonnet King ....unluckily for you, Cleopatra wasn't bathing at the time Laughing
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