Doreen Hampshire
Number of posts: 2024
Age: 69
Location: HULL England
Points: 1757
Registration date: 2008-10-22
 |  Subject: Poem of the week June 4th  Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:46 pm | |
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She lay there
Warm
Limp
Beautiful
Cradled in my hands
Unconscious
Perhaps
Yet my thoughts chilled
As her blood ran cold
Neck broken
Death was instant
I caressed her lifeless body
Whispered regretful sorrows
Buried her gently
Did she see the beauty?
Of her sparrow-hawk reflection
Just before, she met the glass
Of the patio door.[/b] _________________   |
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Doreen Hampshire
Number of posts: 2024
Age: 69
Location: HULL England
Points: 1757
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Poem of the week June 4th Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:59 pm | |
| I have chosen Steve's poem The Looking Glass
A true to life poem looking at the dangers that birds face. also Steve wrote it in such a way that kept the reader guessing until the final lines Well done Steve _________________ |
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Eunice Perkins
Number of posts: 2197
Location: New Zealand
Points: 1839
Registration date: 2008-11-06
| | Subject: Re: Poem of the week June 4th Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:12 am | |
| Steve, it was a worthy winner. |
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Jo Cursley
Number of posts: 2013
Age: 60
Location: East Devon, UK
Points: 1694
Registration date: 2008-10-22
| | Subject: Re: Poem of the week June 4th Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:45 am | |
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